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Naruto- The Story of an unyielding Ninja

Mensaje por Tendo_12 el Jue Jun 20, 2013 10:22 pm

Lean este aporte de FreakySandra1995 del Foro NS Heaven & Earth

FreakySandra1995 escribió:So I really bought the book today and already read it :)There is a scene in there that seems to be really interesting.

There already is a part of the scene I highlighted here in the NaruSaku Debate Thread, I just translated the whole part of this chapters.
Even though the book is "just an underdog story".

There STILL is Masashi Kishimoto named to be the author. Not a note that says "Inspired by the manga written from Masashi Kishimoto." Or something similiar. So he helped creating the story.
But still:
The story of this book is NO proof for something to happen. --> It HAS its parallels to the original Story of Naruto, but the plot is totally different.

The characters similiarities to the original story:

Shu is like the Kakashi/Sarutobi—-> the wise Sensei, who don’t want his students to get hurt
Tsuyu is like a mix of Sakura/Tsunade—-> the medic in the Team, in love with the “bad” guy, VERY Tsundere
Renge is a little bit like Sasuke—> Betrays his Team, leaving his village, “the silent” guy, rival of Naruto
And Naruto is a mix of Jiraiya and Naruto —> The hero of the story, in love with Tsuyu, rival of Renge.
Shuku is the village where Tsuyu and Naruto live.—> Konoha

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(From chapter 5 “I’ll never give up”, P.190)

“Right now… Naruto… he… is fighting…a-all alone… and I…” Tsuyu stuttered. She was obviously overwhelmed and entirely confused. “The villagers have to be evacuated immediately. I… I need to help Naruto!”
“Calm down first Tsuyu”, Shu tried to soothe her and hold her on her shoulders with both of his hands. “What happened?”
“Ren…”
Tsuyu tried to speak, but because of her anxiety, she couldn’t let the words escape her lips.
Renge went to the Kon village. Renge became Master Chaos. Renge wants to destroy our village.
She wanted to say all these things, but couldn’t.
“Sensei, you have to evacuate the village immediately.”
“Listen, Tsuyu.” Said Shu urgent and looked directly into her eyes. “The Jutsu Gukoizen is entwined by myths and riddles.Even when it got activated, it doesn’t mean that Shuku is in danger.”
Tsuyu’s angry look made Shu frown.
“What made you think that?”
“Renge said: It’s the destiny of Shuku to be destroyed.” Just when Tsuyu finished her sentence, she gasped for air because of her anxiety.
“Renge?” Shu looked at her seriously. “You met Renge?” Tsuyu bit her lip. “But you mission was, to bring Renge back to out village!”
“The mission went completely wrong! We failed.” Tsuyu started to cry. ”We made everything worse.”
She remained silent.
“But then Naruto said, that the actual mission is, to protect the village. That’s why I wanted to try everything I could, but then I realized, that there is nothing I can do. But I still don’t want to give up!”
“Tsuyu.” Shu said with a calm voice. “You, Naruto and Renge, you are my students I love from the bottom of my heart. I will never let somebody hurt you.”
Both of them stared in each other’s eyes.
“But Renge isn’t the one I used to know anymore.”
“It’s okay. You don’t need to continue.” She said with a soft smile. “I believe you.”
Tsuyu started to cry once again. Her tears trickled down her cheeks and fell on the floor.
“I know that it’s hard, Tsuyu.” Shu gently stroked her head.
With her tears all of her emotions Tsuyu tried to hide escaped. With a loud sigh, she told her sensei everything. And Shu listened without interrupting her.
“I don’t know what really happened with Renge. I wanted to save him no matter what. But the fact is, that the mountain Hyatsuki is on the direct way towards us.”
“You really like Renge, don’t you?”
“Huh?”
“You can tell me.”
Tsuyu nodded embraced.
“I can’t teach the three brave ninjas of Shuku anything anymore. But I can tell you one thing.”
“Sensei…”
“Listen carefully, Tsuyu. Just remember this: There something bad living in every human being. The name of the thing is: Ideology.” Shu explained.
“Ideology?”
“The bad thing living in Naruto, in you and in me is the thought to protect Shuku no matter what.”
“I thing I know what you are trying to say, Sensei.”
“And in Renge there is a different bad thing living as well.”
“Yes.”
“But which one of us is right is something nobody can tell.”
“Then what should we do?” Tsuyu asked.
“I’ll explain to you, what you can do, if you don’t know what to do anymore.”
Tsuyu nodded.
“Just imagine the happiest and best future you can think about.”
“The happiest future?”
“Then you’ll know who you are and find yourself.”
“I…”
“Close your eyes.”
Tsuyu did what she was told.
“What do you see? Concentrate.”
Tsuyu could see Naruto. He was dumb, a fool, a weirdo, reckless, but still a loving dickhead you can’t be angry all too long. She met Naruto when she was 6. He greeted her with this words: “Hello, my name is Naruto. You can write me love-letters later. I hope we will cooperate well!”
But at this time, Tsuyu just stared at the boy next to Naruto: Renge.
“Tsuyu.” A voice called her. “You may have failed your mission, but there is something you can still do.”
Tsuyu opened her eyes and shouted: “Sensei, you have to evacuate all the villagers. I will go back to Naruto as fast as I can.”
———————-

(So yeah, I wrote this in kind of a hurry, so there is even a bigger chance for grammatical mistakes x). If you want a scan of the pages for proof, just say so and I will give them to you :3)
Also you can use the translations I made if you want to. I don't mind Smile

Ahora, para resumir todo, cito el post de Azariel de NarutoUchiha ya que lo expresa de manera breve, clara y concisa.

Azariel escribió:¿Recordais la novela que Jiraiya escribio y en la cual Minato se inspiro para nombrar a su hijo Naruto? Pues eso, la novela se ha publicado en Japón, escrita por Kishimoto en colaboración con el escritor Akira Higashiyama

Spoiler:
La historia es un paralelo a la del Manga, es la historia de 3 amigos que son un equipo ninja y tienen un Sensei que a su vez es el protector de la aldea.

El Sensei se llama Shu (Kakashi 2.0)
La mujer del equipo Tsuyu (Aka Sakura)
El malo y cool del grupo Renge (Aka Sasuke)
El heroe de la historia Naruto (Enamorado de Tsuyu y rival de Renge)

Hay un capitulo casi al final de la novela donde Shu (El Sensei) le hace ver a Tsuyu que busque en su interior aquello que le trasmita paz y felicidad. Ella cree ver a Renge, el chico el cual le la gustado desde su infancia, pero cuando mira en su interior se da cuenta que aquien en realidad ama es a Naruto

Tsuyu could see Naruto. He was dumb, a fool, a weirdo, reckless, but still a loving dickhead you can’t be angry all too long. She met Naruto when she was 6. He greeted her with this words: “Hello, my name is Naruto. You can write me love-letters later. I hope we will cooperate well!”

Resalto esa oración en negrita porque es similar a lo que le dijo Jiraiya a Tsunade.
Spoiler:

Si Kishimoto en un futuro quiere de una vez por todas resolver el triangulo amoroso que hay en el Team 7 la forma mas lógica seria que lo hiciera de esta forma.

Un gran aporte sin duda :hurr:.


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Mensaje por .Clover. el Jue Jun 20, 2013 11:22 pm

Interesante que Kishi haya colaborado con eso. Sabíamos que existía una historia sobre un tal Naruto, pero nunca pensé que en esa historia se incluirían un pseudo Sasuke y una Pseudo Sakura.

Es imposible no sacar paralelismos de ahí xD.

La manera en la que Tsuyu se da cuenta de que en realidad ama a Naruto es very insteresting. Espero que en el manga ocurra algo similar.. y es más, no me extrañaría para nada que eso suceda.

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Mensaje por Martikos el Vie Jun 21, 2013 1:42 pm

Interesante, se espera la traducción; ese si que sería una novela esperada, aunque me hubiera gustado que Kishimoto la desarrolle, pero bueh, él colabora en el desarrollo de la misma.
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Mensaje por .Clover. el Dom Jun 30, 2013 7:05 pm

Más sobre la historia de Jiraiya, cortesía de LadyGt:

Here we go guys!
This is Part 1 of my compilation of favorite "NS foreshadowing hints" from the novel!
I'm sorry I couldn't upload it yeasterday but I had a really busy day ( NarutoDesignContestOMG)

Anyway most of these moments are similar or already happened in the manga, so they might not sound new to you, while others will be really interesting.  
Some moments have been already translated, however I'll give my own translation as well!

I tried to give the most accurate translation possible, if there are some mistakes please let me know!!!

Enjoy!

List of characters:

Naruto: Shinobi from Shuku.
Tsuyu: Shinobi from Shuku.
Renge: Shinobi from Shuku.

Shuku: Naruto's village.
Kokage: The leader of the village.

Shima: ninja from Kon.
Nikaku: Shinobi from Shuku.

WARNING: SPOILERS! DON'T READ IF YOU DON'T WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

Page 50 - Conversation between Naruto and Tsuyu

[In this Scene Naruto and Tsuyu just attended a secret meeting at the Kokake palace where they got the mission to bring back Renge to the village. In addition, the Kokage assigned a new member to the team, Nikaku Onikoma. Now Naruto and Tsuyu are waiting for him at the steps of the Kokage Palace.]

~~~~~~
«Naruto I want to apologize to you.»
«Uh?»
«When the third Kokage said that ninja are just like weapons, you hit the ceiling.»
«Aah!»Naruto kept playing with a twig, trying to hide his embarrassment. «Eh Eh, unfortunately I'm not really intelligent, so I couldn't counter the old man's statements.»
Not too far from them, a donkey was quietly grazing the grass of the field.
«You have always been like this.»
«Like what?»
«Every time someone says something about me, or Renge, you always lose your temper.»Tsuyu's eyes now shifted to the sky. There wasn't even a cloud that day. «Do you still remember when we performed the Kuchiyose no Jutsu for the first time? We all wanted to prove that our summoning was the best.»
«How can I forget...we almost ended up paralyzed!!»

[There is a little flashback about a conversation Naruto and Renge had few days before Renge left the village.]

Naruto suddenly felt heat spreading on his back.
«...»
«What's wrong?»
Naruto looked at Tsuyu in the eyes. He thought about telling her everything that happened the night before when he was attacked by the giant millipedes, but in the end he decided not to.
Even so, he bursted in laughter and said «It's just that I  had finally learned how to summon and I couldn't wait to use him!»
Even Tsuyu laughed.
«Starting a fight with you guys was the perfect chance!»
Just when Naruto threw the twig he had in his hand in the air, the donkey turned his head towards the two.
«I really couldn't stand that your summonings were cooler than mine!»
«Thank you also for that time, Naruto.»
«Eh?»
«You knew that on that day Renge turned me down...»
«Hum, I...»
«And thickhead as you are, you thought about creating a fight to solve things.»
«No, actually I...»
The two ninja remained silent and for a while you could only hear the blowing of a gentle spring wind.
«Hey Tsuyu...»Suddenly, Naruto's expression became serious. «You... are you still in love with Renge?»
At that question, Tsuyu made a melancholic smile.
«I see.»Said Naruto.
«Yeah...»
«Wouldn't you be happy with me?»
«Wha...?»
Naruto's penetrating gaze made the woman blush.
The donkey was now watching the scene, intrigued.
«Naruto...»
«HAHAHA, c'mon I'm joking!»
«...»
«Besides, being turned down makes you stronger.»Commented Naruto «I'm really grateful to you and Renge. It's all thanks to you if today I'm the person I am.»
Tsuyu gave a radiant smile to her comrade.
«Becoming stronger is one of my goals. And one day, I'll make this world a place where shinobi will not be considered simple weapons anymore.»
«You are already stronger enough as you are.»
«Eh? Why are you saying this?»
«It's rather us....»Tsuyu made a short pause and then continued:«... we rely way too much on your courage.»
«Aw c'mon stop it. These niceties don't suit you.»Naruto, completely red in the face, didn't know how to reply any further.
♪───O☆O────♪

Minor moment! I think it was cute enough to write it down

On Page 61, Naruto, Tsuyu and the new member are trying to get along. There is a funny scene where Naruto's actions make Tsuyu laugh. Naruto, surprised, states that it has been ages since last time he saw her laughing like that, which makes him laugh happily too.

♪───O☆O────♪

Deja vu!
[Page 77 has a scene which heavily reminds the events happened after the Pein arc, when Naruto, Sakura and Sai discover from Karui and Omoi that Sasuke joined Alarsuki. The setting is similar too, but in this case Naruto and co. captured a female ninja, Shima, from the Kon village, who tried to ambush them. The girl tells them that Renge was the one who caused the destruction of the Ton village.]

~~~~~
«These are all lies!»cried Tsuyu.
«Tsuyu...»Naruto tried to step in.
«You need proofs to demonstrate facts!»
«If you want proofs, then I'll go on.»Continued the prisoner.
Naruto squeezed Tsuyu tightly to his chest.
«No, it can be!»Tsuyu abandoned herself in Naruto's arms, sobbing. «He would never do something like that!»
[Then there is a conversation between Nikaku and Shima, while Naruto still holds Tsuyu in his arms. In the end Naruto ends up doing his usual speeches.]

♪───O☆O────♪

Chapter 7, page 95: Teasing scene.

[After the discussion happened the night before, Naruto decides to free Shima, telling her to go away. However, moved by Naruto's speech she decides to join them. This scene happens during their way for the Kon village.]

(Shima) «Naruto I have to ask you something.»
«Sure, what is it?»
«What does "damn pervert" exactly mean?»
«...»
«When we first met, Tsuyu exactly screamed those word to you, and then she kicked you in the sky. Remember?»
«Oh, that's right. You should be careful around this guy.»Tsuyu stepped in, cutting off Naruto's response.«A man that doesn't think twice about using his sage mode to peep on girls at the onsen...»
«Is that true?»Shima stared at Naruto.
«Uh? N-no, well... Ah ah, it's not like...»Naruto made a face at Tsuyu. «Did you really have to say it?»
«Ah! So it is true!»
«T-true...»Naruto turned to Shima. «Did you know that Tsuyu is really rough? One time she hit me so hard that I miraculously escaped death!»
«Because I caught you peeping in the girl's bathroom and you even told me nonchalantly: "It's not like they fall if I look at them!"»
«But I do really think that...!»
«Oh please...»Tsuyu crossed her arms «I have the feeling that someone is trying to get on my nerves today...»
«And frankly, I'm pretty sure you don't dislike the idea of being spied by the undersigned here.»
«Excuse me?»
«It’s galling for me to make you notice this, but I don't always have all this free time to come and give a little peek at your flat chest, I mean, surfboard.»
Not even giving him the time to finish his sentence, Tsuyu's fist met Naruto's face.
«Hey what the hell! You b*tch!»Lamented Naruto while blood was flooding from his nose «It's because of your behavior that not a single man ever tries to come close to you!»
«Pervert.»
«Gorilla woman.»
«What did you just say?!»
At that moment, Shima joined the conversation.
«Naruto, are you really that interested in seeing naked girls?»
«Believe me, that's the only thing that goes through his head!»Anticipated again Tsuyu «Half of his chakra is contaminated by his perversion!»
«You know what? Yes, I like it and I would like to see more.»
Shima, misinterpreting Naruto's provocatives words, without any further explanations, untied her kimono and showed off her breasts.«Here you go then!»
«!!!»
Naruto's and Tsuyu's eyes were glued on the girl's chest.
«If it's you then I don't mind!»Said Shima.
«Wooooooow!!!»
Naruto fell backwards while blood was spurting out his nose like a fountain. Tsuyu awkwardly tried to cover the girl. «Sh-Shi...Shima?!»
«Hey you, do you like Naruto?»After hearing Shima's question, Tsuyu was dumbfounded. Shima insisted: «Well?»
Tsuyu looked at Naruto which, in a sea of blood and tears, was cursing her from afar. She shook her head.
«Well then I'll take him!»Affirmed Shima.
«...Eh?»
«I said that I'll take Naruto!»
«N-No no, wait!!»Tsuyu waved her hands like fans.
«Shima, you did hear what I said, right? This guy is not person you think he is! He is... a pervert, got it? A dirty pervert!!»
«Hey something is telling me that you like Naruto.»
«No you are wrong.»
«I have my suspicions.»
«Based on what?»
«Everything.»
«No way!»Said Tsuyu.«I don't really think so!»
«Then stop complaining!»
«L-like I care, you can do whatever you want...»
«Naruto»Called out Shima. «Do you want to be my boyfriend?»
«Naruto, I warn you, don't come up with weird ideas! This girl is barely sixteen!»
«I might be sixteen, but at least I have some curves.»
Naruto confronted both the girl's chest glaring first at one and then shifting to the other. Under his nose appeared a lascivious grin.
This costed him yet another flight to the forest's borders.

♪───O☆O────♪

To be continued~!

♪───O☆O────♪

Page 159 - Naruto's memories

[Naruto and Tsuyu are finally facing Renge, the traitor. They are trying to convince him to come back to the village with them but he refuses, explaining them his reasons. This makes Naruto reminiscing some experiences they shared together.]

Shu: Sensei of Naruto, Tsuyu and Renge

~~~~~
The air became heavier.
At the age of six, the trio started to train in ninjutsu. Those childhood days flowed before Naruto's eyes.
At the time of the Second Great Ninja War, they fought side by side, as a team. God, how many times Renge saved his life...

" The ramen of the Icho restaurant that Shu sensei used to offer us at the end of class....the days where we used to skip school to go off the beach for a swim... and that time when we hid to peep on Tsuyu while she was changing her swimsuit... she hit me so hard I survived miraculously. Even though Renge was there with me, she didn't even touch him, on the contrary...Tsuyu blushed...sh*t, now that I think about it, in the embarrassment she also looked pleased.
On that day, when I found out that she was in love with Renge, I couldn't stop my tears....when then Renge turned her down I couldn't hold my anger...
To be honest the situation we are in right now reminds me a bit of that moment..."

[They then proceed to fight with their summonings.
If you are curious, their summonings are:
Naruto: a giant mouse, Tora.
Tsuyu: a giant mythological bird, Karura.
Renge: a giant millipedes, Gokomaru.]

♪───O☆O────♪

Page 196 - Naruto's answer.

[Renge leaves and he's now ready to perform his jutsu to crush Shuku with mount Hyakki. Naruto and Tsuyu are trying their best to stop the giants that are lifting up the mountain, but their efforts appear to be useless.]


~~~~~
«Naruto! It looks like these giants are heading to the village!!!»
Naruto came back to reality once he landed his feet on the ground.
Tsuyu reached his position with a jump.
«These things don't have eyes…»
«Tsuyu, go ahead and evacuate the village!»  
«I-I....I can't...I... » hesitated Tsuyu, spacing out.«Even though they don't have eyes… how in the world do they know which direction to take...?»
«Tsuyu! Snap out of it!» Naruto grabbed Tsuyu's shoulders and shook her saying:«Now we don't need to know that! These things are heading to the village! There's no doubt about it!»
«Yes but... »Tsuyu started crying.«W-what can we do...?»
«You can't give up! »
Slap!
Naruto slapped her check.
Tsuyu blinked energetically.
«We failed our mission.»
«...»
« We didn't bring Renge back to the village.» said Naruto grinning his teeth. «And I couldn't even protect our comrade as I promised you. Forgive me.»
Tsuyu shook her head.
«A while ago you asked me what really means for me to be a ninja. That time I couldn't give you an answer, but now I think I can.»
Tsuyu waited patiently without interrupting.
«I believe that shinobi are indeed people destined to sacrifice themselves for the common good.» he said with a nervous giggle. «This is the ideal that the second Kokage handed down to my dad, and that now I inherited.»
«People destined to sacrifice themselves for the common good...»
«I couldn't accomplish the mission and I couldn’t fulfill the promise I made to you either. Even so, I can't give up, I have to endure. After all, how can a person that can't even take care of himself, pretend to protect his own village?»
Tsuyu raised her eyes swollen with tears.
«Renge warned me that I would have been challenged. But I will never give up! Protect the village: this is the final goal of every mission. Protecting the village has the priority on every single promise made. Now our lives are put in second place. Exactly because of this, we can say that we are people destined to sacrifice themselves for the common good and we need to do it with the lessons we inherited.»
«...Right.»
«Where's my Tsuyu? The woman I fell in love with is not a coward!»
Right after Naruto's words, a smile appeared through Tsuyu's tears.
«Oh, this is the woman I know! You are like ramen… I prefer you strong and determined!»
«Naruto, what are your plans now?»
«Somehow, I'll stop these monsters.»
«Understood.»
Naruto and Tsuyu split up and took two different paths.

♪───O☆O────♪

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Mensaje por Suna-no el Dom Jun 30, 2013 10:02 pm

Es algo de lo mas normal ver a las protagonistas femeninas darse cuenta de sus sentimientos casi al final de ellos. Miren a Winry de Full Metal Alchemist...Se dio cuenta de que se habia enamorada de Edward sin saberlo e incluso diciendo al principio del manga que nunca se enamoraria de un chico mas bajito que ella.

Tambien esta el caso de Kagome Higurashi,que era algo obvio que estaba enamorada de Inuyasha a inicios del manga,pero esta casi a la mitad que se dio cuenta de esos sentimientos...

No me sorprenderia que Kishimoto resuelva el triangulo amoroso de esta manera,es muy comun en los mangas Shonen que la protagonista haya estado equivocada sobre la persona que creia amar,o esta otra opcion...que Kishimoto decida dejar a todos por su lado.
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